Wednesday, 6 August 2014


Success Criteria

Brainstorms to identify main ideas to be used in writing.
Uses most of the main ideas in the writing.
Uses paragraphs and sequences ideas.
Attempts to end writing with a simple conclusions.
Spells most words correctly.
Uses capital letters, full stops, commas, apostrophes, question marks, exclamation marks.
Rereads writing to edit out information that does not improve the message.
Rereads writing to edit in words and phrases that improve the message.
Uses a dictionary to identify and check spelling attempts.
Checks writing for basic punctuation.

“Hi I’m going to tell you about my holiday life. It is really boring.”
My mum makes me go to a holiday programme where a lot of kids bully me for example Ryan!!! He is a really mean guy, he fights me for no reason and Oliver he said that he was the best in the soccer team and he said that the coach cried when he wasn’t out there, but he hardly scored any goals.

Inflatable World, the best place that I have ever been to, even better than Splash Planet. I spent like an hour and a half on the battle zone and that is my fav. I raced Oliver at the obstacle course and I came last. The hardest part on the obstacle course is the climbing frame and I didn’t really go on any of the other activities.

In the weekends I always went to dads but he doesn't have any internet, so we were pretty much always on the Playstation 3. We do go for a lot of walks and Candice came over last week with her baby. I found out that she is a momma's girl, so when Candice went she started to cry.

BEST holidays ever except that I got BULLIED BY RYAN AND OLIVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that actually made it THE WORST HOLIDAYS EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sunday, 3 August 2014

New Zealand Flag Facts

NEW ZEALAND!!!!!!!!!!!!

Super Squid Wow Words


A moment in time...

My Life At  Night

I saw my telly black but with some writing on it.
I saw my WWE photos covering my wall.
I heard my cat purring away.
I heard the TV talking a Roald Dahl CD.
I felt my cat pouncing away at my feet.
I felt the warmness of my blankie.
I wondered if I will sleep walk and destroy a window.
I wondered if I will fall off the bed in the middle of the night.

Stoney Creek Ranch Camp